I'd like to call you mayonnaise...
...because you are as smooth as silk :)
Well, at least your animation was. The story was a little lackluster, but I'm with the school of thought that an experimental film does not need one.
What was absolutely terrific about your flash was the animation. It was soooooo smooth it made my eye balls weep tears of joy that grew up, got married, and had little tear babies that were told of the impressive graphite feats you accomplished. One moment that really shined to me was when the turtle hopped off into the distance. It takes real skill to make something look as if it is vanishing into the horizon when there is no scenery for scale to help trick the eye, so bonus points to you, good sir. Another one of my favorite aspects was whenever the main character would turn, it really felt like he was a round object with some depth. characters with depth- you might wanna go teach Hollywood a thing or too ;) Finally, the mickey mousing you did (and for all you readers who don't know, GOOGLE IT) was wonderful. Not quite on par with Mousecliks, "Shoo Fly," but good enough that it really added something to the whole affair. But what would good syncing be without good music, right? So by extension (and now directly) I would like to praise Tilman for the music. It was wonderful :)
Thank you so much for this neat little flash. You really should go try and work for Cartoon Network, Nickelodeon, Disney, Pixar, or Ghibli: I think they would be impressed!
4/5 8/10. Good job Turtleco.
P.S. The German was a nice Shamylanian twist!!
'Till Next Time---------------------Shadow_Fox_N inja!