Pretty pretentious..
You really built it up at the beginning when you said it was something people can learn from and that they should examine your animation frame by frame to learn something...
There really wasn't that much animation for what was there.. but when they did move it was jerky and wasn't very smooth, even for a rough animation. I'd say it was a good effort and that you have some talent, but its just a big turn off when you read a disclaimer like that at the beginning. Just say its "unfinished" and leave it at that. I also felt like the characters all looked like that Sasuke guy from Naruto... and I hate Naruto so no bonus points there.
Hoping you'll take it down a notch next time and be a bit more humble. Artists shouldn't have egos, because if they already think theyre such hot shit then they'll never get better.