Great work!
Keep making videos and keep using my beats!
Reviews for "Mario Battle Bros. ep. 3"
SuperMarioFan9000 responds:
OMG! You? Man, what are you reviewing here? So nice of you, I'll use your audio though. Thanks!
F-blasted by a GORILLA?!?
Ha! can't stop laughing at that. Are the next eps. that funny? please tell!!!!!
Yeah...
sorry to say, but that was a blatant rip-off of SMBZ, though one of the better ones I have seen, only reason I gave it a nine. They are called Hammer Bros, and that speech the dark star gave was pretty epic.
SuperMarioFan9000 responds:
Hammer Bros.? Why? There are no brothers that use hammers and are koopas (I don't know what to say)
Improvement done and improvent needed.
You've improved from your previous flashes, BUT that doesn't mean it can't be improved anymore. May I suggest that you...
1. Make the title and main menu text more legible by typing it.
2. Try to make the story more clearer, as most of its understandable, but some parts leave me confused. possibly because of the grammatical structure of some of the dialogue.
3. Change the text near the quality buttons, as due to the color of some backgrounds, it's hard to tell which setting of quality the button is.
4. Try not to mix video game worlds together to much. For example, when Luigi uses Chaos Blast, mixing Shadow's technique with the Mario world. If you do attempt to do something like this, at least give a reason as to how he can do it.
Other than that, you're doing great. Keep on spriting and don't give up, no matter what anyone tells you.
mmm...
I won't say you ripped off SMBZ, but you definitely have some influences in there. i.e. the special moves (the whoosh-whoosh sounds, and everything freezes), the power ups, even the music. Its adequate, just needs a little bit of polish. Keep it up!