try again, prove another style.
I don't think it's a smbz rip-off. It's more like Shadefalcon would make...you got
influences from Dawning of Darkness. there many animation mistakes...
tips:
Don't use a lot of DBZ sounds.
Don't use the same music of Smbz or any famous flash. (We are tired of Metal Sonic remix theme )
Check your layers, they're terribles!
Don't move with that speed your backgrounds
(EDIT): Fine, sorry..
Improvement done and improvent needed.
You've improved from your previous flashes, BUT that doesn't mean it can't be improved anymore. May I suggest that you...
1. Make the title and main menu text more legible by typing it.
2. Try to make the story more clearer, as most of its understandable, but some parts leave me confused. possibly because of the grammatical structure of some of the dialogue.
3. Change the text near the quality buttons, as due to the color of some backgrounds, it's hard to tell which setting of quality the button is.
4. Try not to mix video game worlds together to much. For example, when Luigi uses Chaos Blast, mixing Shadow's technique with the Mario world. If you do attempt to do something like this, at least give a reason as to how he can do it.
Other than that, you're doing great. Keep on spriting and don't give up, no matter what anyone tells you.
Yeah...
sorry to say, but that was a blatant rip-off of SMBZ, though one of the better ones I have seen, only reason I gave it a nine. They are called Hammer Bros, and that speech the dark star gave was pretty epic.
Hammer Bros.? Why? There are no brothers that use hammers and are koopas (I don't know what to say)
Very Cool!
Man, that was awesome! Man, can you teach me to improve like that? IT'S AWESOME!
Woah
Nice cool animation! Keep this up man! I like it! I want to do that episode too! Man, awesome completely awesome.