No good...
I underdstand that making flashes is just plain hard to do for some people, but this is a good example of something that could be good... Consider it a project to make it better.
Some good things to worry about are:
1. The shiftyness of the portals,
2. The smoothness of the characters,
3. The smoothness of the music (it was choppy),
4. The humor,
5. And, lastly, the plot. You do not know why link was where he was, why he had to kill the people, and what was really happening.... It was also very short... All he did was kill the other Link and the old man, and then the minister (for some odd reasons).
~ Buza-chan