Oh boy. I'm the first to review. I feel so warm. Several problems... wouldn't Zelda going into the past alter the future that he was teleporting from, and hence let Gammon and his forces of anal-penetration rule over the world, creating a world w/o the kingdom?.. Also.. you spellt 'and know one ever'.. it's 'and no one'.
Interesting premise.. could have used a bit of work though. *shrug*