Interesting dynamic story
I enjoyed the story. You went a bit overboard on the profanity, but I can't say it doesn't fit the situation. You gave it the appropriate rating for that anyway.
The story is good and I like all of the options to choose from. I kinda got the character personalities figured out after a few endings. Also medals just for enjoying the dynamic storyline - great little bonus.
The drawings are good and comic-like.
The only problem I encountered was that when you finish the game (either by victory or failure) you sometimes get the "go back" options in the regular option spot instead of the menu style. This might be intentional, but it seems kinda off to me. Of course it's hardly anything to drop the rating for.
Great story game.