Reviews for Luminiscense

[IAMTARA]

Amazing

This flash is by far one of the greatest I've ever seen. The scenery, the art, the colors the and even the cheesy dialogue all make this such an emotional piece.

The only reason why I'm nitpicking about the little flaws is because this work has so much potential.

As other reviewers have pointed out, a fleet of Nazi bombers bombing an empty (albeit beautiful) field makes no sense. Although the scene when the planes appeared almost made me cry, the illogical nature of it all detracted a lot from the otherwise powerful piece.

I also noticed that the music cut out whenever one of the characters began speaking but idk if it was just my computer acting up.

I can't wait to see more of this story, keep up the good work.

[AJAvalanche]

Cool but...

the script needs a lot of work. The dialogue is a bit cheesy- I mean, the whole idea isn't bad and even the lines aren't bad themselves, but everything seems somehow rushed and unpolished, it just looks like a couple of talking heads. You should add some diversity in setting up the "camera", a little more mimic- maybe looking away, or turning head away, or leaning a bit forward- something to make the scenes less static. There's wind so you can add a stronger blow and- best- it should affect the characters- pause the dialogue for a moment, add an unrelated smile or a line.

And I know that nazis were evil and all that, but bombarding landscapes? I know that it's both more dramatic and easier to tell with planes, but to many people this will look odd and plain silly. Could have used tanks, infantry, even misguided artillery or a combination of forementioned.

Otherwise I liked the animation, loved the art style, audio's also great. Voice-acting's not only well performed but also the actors themselves are well chosen and the music fits in perfectly.

[Tates79]

hahaha

that really hit the spot., literally

[IAmTheSpoon]

Erm...

Okay, so Nazis bomb innocent valleys full of... nothing for no reason(or just to get 2 random people down for fun)
...
Okay 0_O

Otherwise, I see nothing wrong with the flash. Proper music, good drawing skills, etc...
I'd just work on the lip animations and lip sync more.

Good luck on part 2. Cheers.

[Noiz-EProductions]

Not bad

Good scenery. Solid story. But the animation was a bit choppy. Room for improvement, but overall a great animation.