Bravo my good sir, Bravo!
I enjoyed your take on this little dark noir based story. Just when you think this fellow gets the girl of his dreams tragedy rears its ugly head and delivers to him a fate more wosrse than death! When I read your back story after your feature presentation I was shocked and awed at the original version. Was it cut out due to time restraints and because it was a tad bit over the top? Fortunately you still left the ending somewhat intact. That was the blow that caused me to both laugh and almost cry. You can understand this guy's pain yet you can't help but laugh at the situation. Your style was superb, Perfect contrast to both light and dark styles of shading. Voice acting was also a grade A+ in this short. For being part of the first Movie Jam on this site I'm awarding you a perfect score. A perfect 10/10 and a solid 5/5. Congradulations! And I also want to add that in this short, I've never seen a dog as ugly as that in my entire life! Keep up the good work and have a great day.