Reviews for "Proper Raptors"

Lol the guy at the loading screen

he is gonna shoot himself? paiful o_o this is lol fun

Clever girl

Really funny, no idea where you got this idea though.


I love this, intensly

Could it be

Im giving this a 7 because i could have sworn ive seen this on NG already and it a simply resubmittision and since i can find the the one i could have sworn was word for word this im giving a 7

You know...

This was fantastic, but if this story was based off of a story from the forums.......then wow, I worry :D