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It was better then last one but it still had to much lines and the voice was kinda off.
Please dont rush your animations just try your best man i mean this looks like it was done in 1 hour.Also dont lie about your mom smoking or what ever people will just give you a 1.Also all the people who put 10s must have terrible judgement and in the futre might get married by a hooker or were just drunk and gave you a 10.This was not even close to perfect but you have made a little improvement