Could be better
Despite the sloppy jump issues, the game is very good, the music and the art are superb!
However, the story itself it's kinda confuse, i mean, it's not clear what was the purpose of the game, it's not touching neither emotional.
But, I see a lot of potential on you man! For a first game it's pretty good, so I hope you keep making good flash games and keep improving =D
Not going to lie.
I cried a little bit at the end. Maybe it was the music or what happened, but... Damn.
As for the game itself, I adored the music and design. Nothing fancy was needed-- just a few simple designs and let the game do the rest. The controls were a bit off, but my keyboard may be to blame for that. I liked how short it was, but at the same time, I can see this game being longer.
All in all, wonderful game, but I can see some room for improvement.