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Reviews for "E&D: The Party"

Can't wait till episode 2!

Awesome animation, a high level of humour, excellent music incorporated well, and I played the tree! Yay! :D

Music stood out the most!

Hey man,

Nice job here style wise. The animation was nice too and it seems like you will be doing this for a while so it will keep improving! The music set the tone for this show quite nicely and is one of the best things you have going for it. I do suggest when an normal episode comes out it actually goes somewhere...

Nice going.

animation got huge potential

i suggest better writers lol

well

The art was good and smooth, BUT the characters were basically two animals with nothing else... They were wearing clothes and could speak and all, but besides that, nothing makes them a prime character rather than a secondary one...

About the story, i think that it was just too much tyme for a short story with a weak punchline and it was not deep enough... There was a start, only one or two middle things, and then the end, wich was not exiting at all, and was predictable...

The story has potential, and you can reach it if you re do the story in about 2 mins instead of about four, and add a background story of why are they doing what...

I will give this a rating of 8, mainly because it keep me watching, witout being too bored... But i think that this first episode have been much more fluent...

Please, keep doint these. Im sure you dont need to improve so much, just make your next works with a deeper story, and a nice background...

i was waiting for it to end....

i was waiting for it to end!
so i could review this!
very nice animation's expeccially the mouth's
great humor and good pace of animation "not to fast and not to slow"
i'm definitly seeing forward to next episodes!