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Reviews for "A Barn Owl"

Nice

Its refreshing, to see something that isn't over the top violent, crude, super silly or pornographic for a change.

Not bad

For being new to animating I thought you did a pretty good job - I can't imagine how hard it was to make each frame; I did like the art; the owl was cute. :)

It was pretty good.

Only thing I would recommend is trying to increase your framerate as it was a bit chalky at times, that or my computer is utter shit. But anyways a framerate of at least 30 should give you smoother animation.

very cool

nicely done. and its obvious that you put effort into this. im guessing this is mostly frame by frame?
Not a lot of people realize how difficult that is to do.
some suggestions:

your zoom in on the mouse gets a little choppy also..

maybe add a stop to the end of the flash (with a replay button)....something i wish i would have done in my submission. trust me that makes a difference.

Also make it a longer.. I know what its like to submit something half finished or really short.. its tempting but definately not worth it...yet another mistake i made. sigh....

otherwise, awesome job!

Good art

This seems like it could become something much better. If you develop a story or plot, an example is the mouse escapes and runs through foliage being chased by this owl or something along those lines. At the end it seemed like it became VERY slow and laggy? IDK if it was just lag or the frames getting further and further apart? maybe increase frame rate a tad? But yeah as I said, it's a good idea to develop your ideas and redevelop the new ideas to create something larger. This animation has a beginning, no real middle and no ending, just a fade to black, so try to create something with a begginning a middle and an end and you'lle be a winner. :) 4/5 (better than most of the crap in this flash portal)