Reviews for My First Showdown

[ZipZipper]

VAC 11 Judge Review:

Being a string of voices, it was sometimes confusing knowing what voice was which. The plot was a little questionable and its pacing was a bit slow. I’m sure that’s part of the farce, but I think it could have been executed better. Your vocal range was pretty good, but the fact that you were doing multiple voices for almost the same type of character made it kind of dry. It was also almost at the same emotional level the entire time. Random side note, I really love that singing at the end and how you say shut up during it ahahahahaha. Anyways, I think the main thing this entry needed was more emotional levels and an easier plot for the audience to grab onto more instantly. Otherwise, it’s a pretty good piece with a couple of very definitive voices. Nice work!

Jakoshi responds:

I'll take all the criticism I can get. It's hard juggling this and taking 15 hours of college courses with 3 studio classes, so it was a bit more rushed than it should have been. I'll even admit that this isn't the best demonstration of these voices, and I should only submit my best. But you clearly indicated areas that need work, which is duly noted and greatly appreciated. In the mean time I'll practice and take into account these tips. Thanks!