What the guy below said.
Can't say I made an account just to comment here, but I cam across this not too long ago myself, and to be honest, I thought the guy below had some pretty good points. You're kinda all over the place with everything, and very little makes any sense. I mean...it's good as maybe an art showoff, but nothing really ties together overall. You try to make a story happen and it all falls flat- there's not a ton of believable cohesion- it's more like 'it happens just because'.
The art style just confuses me, personally, but it sorta works, in a...well...weird art way...and yes, the eyes were off beat to me- you could've went with simpler and done better, IMO. Either put detail or don't, though, in my opinion. Not both at once.
At least you agree about the repetitive songs... But think about...y'know...pay attention. He got this for the purpose of reviewing you, not HATING you. I don't really see any intent at being 'mean' here- just someone's honest critique that maybe you should listen to.
After, taking critique is part of doing art. And animation is art, is it not? Or are you not an artist? If not, maybe consider looking into something else that requires less public response? Just a though, but honestly, I don't mean anything bad by this at all, I'm sorry. Just maybe listen, mull on it, y'know?
Peace and love!