good
a little choppy but you have the potential tobe a pretty good animator
good
a little choppy but you have the potential tobe a pretty good animator
pretty good start
not bad, seen worse. you have good potential
good job, (:
it was actually not that bad in my opinion . although it was kinda choppy, it was really creative and had some good potential.
hope you decide to finish it(:
It was pretty good.
I don't really know how to do flash, but this is really good , if you're a beginner than it is awesome. I liked it
You're on the right track
some sound would be good, make it longer of course, and work on the flow of the movement. I like the captions