wth I almost missed the action scenes
What in the world were you thinking when you made such a long text and blank pause between the intro and the action I thought the intro was the whole episode and the text was the end credits. I wouldn't have noticed the action after it if I hadn't left the window open to do something else.I advise shortening the action-less pauses cause the pacing is all weird. Also this would benefit from clearer audio.
points taken. there's supposed to be a "conversation" in the rolling text part. (points finger at lazy partner who never turned up the other voices) but i'll try to improve on this come episode 3.
Almost didn't watch the whole thing
If it wasn't for NitrogenousBeing down there, I would have missed all the hard work after the text. Honestly, when most people see text scrolling from the bottom, they immediately dismiss it as credits and close the video. I'm sure the reason why this doesn't have a higher rating might have something to do with them thinking it was a one-minute video... And it might have something to do with not being able to understand a word that anyone was saying...
that's why i put in the subtitles! if the reason they can't understand what the characters are saying is because of the "accent" then boo to you, my friend. That happens to a lot of my friends going international. (I am a true-blue Filipino; a rather educated one at that. peace!) however, taking your point, the text rolling part does seem to lack ,,, how you guys say it, "pizazz"? episode 3 won't disappoint, i promise you that. XD
uber boring
well drawn ish and animated but i was bored out my skull