I watched both Twilloween and this and firstly i have to say congrats on getting two animations online for Halloween! For those who don't animate it's hard to understand how long a short can take to create, especially when all the work is done by one person.
I preferred this to Twilloween, i think because the Twilight saga has been done time and time again, this on the other hand was more original.
You had some nice shots, movements and the whole thing flowed very well !
Can't wait for more!