First submission ?
... so, well done ! I liked this piece in general but... well... this is too soft to my mind. I don't mean it sounds bad but... this is very techno-ish. You need to make it sound like a very agressive tune !! It must sound very agressive ! I don't think mine is better than yours ( Yes, I've made a Rocked version of SSBM !) but... since I've put electric guitars in it... you'll know what I'm talking 'bout, buddie!
...Anyway, goodjob ! 4/5 for you !
-Gorekiller-