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Reviews for "School - Day One"

Excellent

Man, that was very good. I liked the idea of making the first day of school so dramatic. Keep it up.

"And it was all just a dream."

Never EVER end your story, game, drawing, Flash, screenplay, movie, radio show or.. whatever THIS was.. with "And it was all just a dream." Seriously, google that phrase and you will see that it is the #1 thing that producers and directors hate when they see a script, and if you get a reputation for ending stuff like this, no one will ever love you, and you will have to move to the South Pole and fight with penguins for the last of the cold fish. Seriously, I am not making this up: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php /Main/AllJustADream -- and I quote "This is the #1 thing ever that grates on people. EVER." Which issad, as I would have given this an 8 or a 9 without the ending. But endings matter [b]that much[/b].

Pahgawk responds:

I think you missed the point of the movie... that life ISN'T like that...

dude

i can tell your not a frame by frame person and if you could make the drawings more detailed and made something funny like he wakes up and falls off his bed then you would have something really nice

but good effort anyway :D

Pahgawk responds:

Yeah, I've actually bee experimenting a bit with frame by frame, and I find it looks better on the whole, but it takes a while... and since I only had four hours between when I woke up and when I went to school, I figured I didn't have time :P

...but yeah, you've got a point. Next movie that's what I intend to do :)

Was alright

I thought it was alright tbh, it made me laugh with the guys expression at the end, even if there wasnt meant to be one lol

Pretty Good

Well I don't see why there ar so many negative reviews. I thought it was pretty good.
And even better if you consider the time you took on it.
People that are saying the plot is bad are wrong. We've all thought about having a more interesting life, and I like this idea.