Reviews for Zelda Files: Chapter 7

[greatwh1teshark]

Best one in the series

Okay as the writer of this series i just feel that fater reading your comments, that i should say this. This episode sure the pot thing may have been overdone, but orginally this started out as a comic, this episode was the first one to be animated, but this was never done as a rip off off the four swords adventures, i was writing this series before i joined NG as for this episode, this episode is a three part story which carries in on the next two chapters, which are the last episodes in this series, but i can say there is a second series after this, which is very connected because theres a serial killer mini series in it and a major climaxing finish which is connected to this three episode mini series at the end. As for the Dark Link turnming good, this was done because no one would expect besides you´re all forgetting, it is dark link, he will have an ulterior motive, and if you keep watching it´ll all kick off. This series, the final episodes sets the mark for the second series which goes extremely epic, this was fone to be differnt to everythign that people would expect in a Zelda series but trust my the final episode wil be worth watching as will the second series. All the episodes are much longer and have a dynamic overall story. Now as regards to Peltos, i loved the way you´ve changed the comic to an episode, i liked it a lot, i can´t wait to see the second episode in this series or the third. I know they´l be worth it, good work man, sure there were spelling errors but they weren´t too bad.

peltos responds:

thx man. i already have some new ideas for the next one to put some more emotions in it en maybe more violent :P

[KayneHusky]

Decent~

Obviously with it being YOUR flash parody thing you'll take artistic liberties and make the characters act and behave the way you feel is necessary. However I'll review it on the basis of being a zelda fan and all that stuff.

The being said there wasn't too much to harp on. The weed this IS too overdone for sure, but what makes it seem even less intelligable is the vulgarity in a few scenes. I won't harp on the whole "Dark link would never help them, blah blah blah" thing because of artistic liberty and the like, though it does seem kinda odd he'd just pop out of nowhere.

I DO like how you gave the different Links personalities to match their colors. Though you could work on it a little more with "Sapphire" and make him seem a bit less generic.

All in all, I'd say it was decent but could use a spot of work on dialogue devolopment. Just remember there are plenty of ways to convey emotion, and vulgarity cheapens the experience most of the time. If it's a character's perogitive to be vulger, just don't overdo it X3. As for voices, don't listen to that other guy >.> Link, or "Links" having voices is silly and completly breaks any kind of Zelda continuity in my (and a lot of Zelda fan's) eyes.

Peace~

peltos responds:

i really respect your honesty and i was thinking to put some mugshots or somthing like that in the next chapter so i hope that helps.

[Katgirl900214]

Not very funny

First of all the whole weed ting has been way overdone. Its not even funny anymore. Second dark link would never, NEVER, help out the actual link(s). Third I dont know why but I feel like this is just a lame ripoff of the 4 swords adventure series. Fourth it would have been nicer if their were voices and captions, not just captions. The only thing I really liked was the music, but even then everyone uses zelda music :P

[laenynot]

not bad

i say not bad but the thing is i liked the fact you want dark link as a good guy but the thing is he is evil made from link him self so there is no way he turn good but the story is good and i liked the pot in it but i just have to say that to make the story realy good you have to nice fighting scenes

peltos responds:

yes that is coming in the next 2 chapters. this is more like a introducing chapter.

[Eastbeast]

Hey man, I enjoyed it

some very mild spelling errors, but who cares, its about the comedy, sprites and storyline, keep me posted for anything that comes.

peltos responds:

im glad you liked it