Inaccurate, yet has potential.
Before i get to the review, there are a few things i found out which arne't true:
- Baron does not have two R's.
- Cecil can't use magic or summons.
- Leviathan does NOT look like that - he's a giant sea serpent.
- Terra could have kicked his ass in a realistic battle.
For one thing, it's just ILLOGICAL that Terra would use "Fire 1" in a battle like this. She could sooo easily kick ass with an Ultima spell, Merton, or X-Zone, heck, even a Fire 3 spell. In a realistic battle, Terra would win because Cecil did invalid moves the whole time (moves he couldn't orginally do). If there was some story to back this up, i might be able to accept it.... but otherwise... nice try. I'm not saying it was bad, just inaccurate. It was still a pretty good fight scene, and you have potential as a sprite-flasher. Keep up the good work.