Here's the thing... you're good
I've been listening to some tracks from Joe Jackson, then I stumbled upon "Be My Number Two", which is an absolute classic. At first I expected myself to hear bland music on my first click today.
But no, I clicked on your song, and the result is a very soothing track. You should do more. :)
Hmm... to be nitpicky, the bass just needs a little tweak (increase the volume just a little). Other than that, you get my 5 and 10. Kudos, Piagnoa.