I like the feel of the piece, I'd have liked a bit more of a distinctive melody but thats just my opinion, and being for a video game doesn't really matter as much. Something you could very easily do is rework the end so it loops into the beginning?
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Radiationator responds:
Yeah, he wanted a medieval/wild/upbeat feel to it. Yes, I could rework the ending if necessary. It already has a decent loop, but if I reworked it it'd be perfect.
Thanks for your review! :)