Reviews for Kaiblade Episode 4

[tekkenfist]

Great Pace, lacking ambiance.

So far your pacing is nice, with 5 mins an episode, you can truly take your time and develop your characters. You never want to rush things like that, cause you always want your audience to care about the characters on some level.

Your animation skill is improving, so I won't critique you on that this time. Only thing I can say is keep it up, smooth animation always beats flashy animation in my opinion.

You could do with more ambiance, or background sound effects. Make the scene come to life. Feint noises such as town chatter, or the forest at night. It's several little things that make an animation great so keep that in mind.

CartoonCoffee responds:

Thanks for the review, I realized the lack of ambiance a little late in the production. When your almost done small details slip your mind haha. I'll keep it in mind for the next one

[TheWolfShade]

frying pan to the face!!

I got a good kick out of that part, then her actually asking it after that. :) Guess i have to wait for episode 5 to find out more about whats goin on!

One thing i would comment on was the walking in the beginning, it seemed very choppy, and its the only part i can say that for. As a whole very well done! Lookin forward to the next one!

CartoonCoffee responds:

Thank you

[Sci-Fi]

so..

bout time i gave a review. this was the best of the series so far. story is getting far more interesting. your color and art has stepped it up for the most part in this. still a good mix of humor and serious moments, which means the writing is good. thats not to say somethnigs arent awkward, liuke a few walking cycles, but practice makes perfect. so i'm hoping to see more soon

CartoonCoffee responds:

-Thank you, I'm trying to keep a good balance between comedy and the seriousness of the series. Thanks for noticing.
- Also, I agree that there are a few awkward scenes in the animation but as you said, practice makes perfect =)

-Kaiblade

[Pepperjack86]

Lack of Breakfast

I'm still rolling over the "Breakfast would be great!" part. She really gave him a whollop!! ^.^

[RiverJordan]

You should hire a writer

Well the voice acting is pretty bad to start, but you should hire a writer to get some better dialogue going, which in turn might help out the voice acting too.

Other than that, keep working on it :) With more practice your animation and art will improve and it could turn into something big.

Also, you need wayyy more sfx everywhere