Before I start, I want to explain your rating here, and what I voted. I voted 5/5, but I want to give you a 6/10 star rating. I gave you a 10/10 because of the quality of the flash compared to others on this site, and because it affects your status rating overall. However, My rating to you is 6/10, because I expect a lot more of you than what you displayed by this flash.
Animation: Possibly the best aspect of this flash. From the 3D models to the 2D characters, you did a bang up job. But this is one of the things I expected more from... you failed to make everything realistic. I realize this is unfair to expect from you and the flash upload is already 18 MB, but I know you could do better. Hair doesn't flow or move, clothes are rigid, the environment isn't smooth flowing, etc.
Concept: It is as awesome as it is complex, this can be an entire series and may very well deserve its own collection. Your overview and character design is virtually flawless and in depth, your story telling skills could use SOME improvement but whose doesn't? Work out the kinks with other writers, and this may have the potential to go on the air itself.
Audio: This is your most lacking feature. I suggest working with a professional mixer or one of the better people on NG. Your characters voices are inconsistent and conflict with the music. But don't get me wrong, you still did a very great job, I'm still holding you to a higher standard. Honestly, your voices and sound effects were still good.
Music: Great selection, I'm always a big fan of instrumentals, but you used them so well in combination with your shots that they made emotional impacts of suspense and intensity, even though your content was significantly less impactful.
Content: Outstanding. You have created universes with their own histories, and can easily immerse the viewer into these worlds. However, you are missing a pause button. Ironically, I needed that upon my first viewing. You are also missing a link to your trailer, a story board, and other things you did while conceptualizing and making this thing.
Shot selection: This is the ONE SECTION I went easy on you. I disagree with some of your choices, such as your mini strobes and your scene merging. You did an excellent job of these, but I don't feel it 100% appropriate for your story. It somewhat weakened your story in some areas but helped it flow in others. Remember, the camera is focused on what you want the viewer to see.
Graphics: This was so good, you need a graphics section. To go in depth, your 3D models were impressive for flash, but you must know they can be improved upon. They look too blockish and bulky. If you spend more time on them, you can make them look really awesome.
Characters: From their personality to their design, each one is unique and has their own story one can get interested in. The most amazing thing you did was not animate, not create a sound track, not even make an amazing flash. What you did here, was beyond praise... you took characters in which the story focused each of them as anonymous and meaningless and made them blend with each other and made it so each one tells a story. You did what the greatest of writers can only strive to do, you made these nonexistent figments of your imagination matter, and in a subtle way.
Closing statements: If you would like a more in depth review, PM me and from that point on I'll see what else I can give you in terms of advice. I'm looking forward to your next one.