I enjoyed it at first, and even though the breakdown led nicely with the crescendo, it kind of lost steam. Also, the wobble was a bit grating. It might help to sidechain it and a lot of the other high frequency sounds through a compresser.
Other than that I loved the lofi EQ on your drums, I'm working on my own setup for a similar lofi sound. I look forward to doing battle with you at NGADM! =D