This is epic!
Good animation, good everything! Heck, this might become one of the legendary NG videos, up there with Madness, Clock Crew, and all the others.
Reviews for "S.W.A.T Shadows Episode 1"
LKLostKID responds:
Thank you, I'd like that id like to have an on going series like xin..many more characters will be introduced as each episode goes on. =]
Great Job
A great skill has been given to you, and i hope that everyone knows that this animation kicks total flash ass
LKLostKID responds:
Thank you for your wise words :D
awwwwwww :(
the preloader is glitched it well not load up right and it well not play it (no its not my computer). i could have done the preloader codeing for you. i well at least give you a 10 for trying
LKLostKID responds:
what part of the preloader is glitched? was you able to watch the flash at all? PM me with a response please. many thanks :)
Pretty good
Good animating and good sound. Script could use a bit of editing to pick up the pace.
That girl spent too much time on the phone with someone she apparently didn't want to talk to. I don't know what he could have possibly been saying to keep her on the line that long--and then she says she'll meet with him. And she repeated herself. There's got to be a faster way to get your point across.
Some of the SWAT guys' dialogues could probably be shortened as well without losing any humor.
LKLostKID responds:
Hi Reikiba, thank you for your review.
The script is slow paced.. Im very new at script writing and was worried it may be to much of...a mouthful. However this is Episode 1 and while the script could of been optimized to tell the story in less words this is how the end result turned out. I am however going to take my script a revise before sending off to my voice actors and spend more time with them getting a better connection and feeling from within the characters.
awesome!
i love your animating skills. like people have mentioned, it was a little slow to move in plot, but i really enjoyed this! your animation is gorgeous and so smooth and the script was pretty well-written. thanks so much for letting me be a part of this - it really has been a pleasure :) hope to be able to work with you again!
LKLostKID responds:
Thank you.. ill be writing the script differently this time and try to keep the flow mixed up instead of getting boring quickly. I sent you a buddy request so I can add you to the credits in the left hand side. =]