okay, the pros. Awesome drawings, and sick animation. really consistent characters, dope creatures. just really good on the actual animation, except for a few perspective tweaks here and there, and a few jumpy run cycles. Cons, cliche as shit, and its a little overambitious for you. there were a few jaw dropping scenes though. i'd like to see you hone your talent a little more directly, and not have so much going on. but please, continue animating. If you really feel that this series is the way to go, do it. but i really agree with others when they say your kinda biting dbz's style. you have great drawings, so id like to see you develop your own style a bit more. all in all, draw more, in and out of flash so you acquire your own methods. great stuff dude.