actually, i dig it!
this was some pretty sweet FxF animation, and i think you guys did a good job! It was really funny for a stereotypical shounen anime. but...
There were some parts where I couldn't tell if you were trying to parody other animes or if you were really serious, but I still lol'd.
Of course, there are always things which need improvement. In my opinion, you should have just made Sherbert a girl, b/c the voice actress didn't make her voice masculine enough to sound like a strong guy's; it just kinda detracted from the overall effect. That, and the sound would peak when the character's yelled, which hurt. a lot.
(btw, totally loved how Pokes' hair was Kuwabara style [yu yu hakusho], oh, and a lot of it was definitely DBZ reminiscent. which is always cool.)