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Reviews for "Candy Time"

cool, depressing.

looks like it took you some time (and some drugs ("High" five!))
to come up with this, but i have to say something to a previous
commenter. He's not in the middle of nowhere in space, it looks like
he's near a planet. And satellites and space shuttles actually have to
put a lot of work into staying in orbit for a long time. So eventually, the
planet's gravity would pull him closer until he begins to fall. But he would
die long before he hit the ground, since he would burn to a crisp on re-entry.

Anyway, bravo! most entertaining!

FUNNY

The heat of going through the atmosphere would kill him, and melt the chocolate. Besides, there's gravity, so he would've died by the fall. Especially if he landed on something sharp. other than grass. But he would still die if he landed on grass.)

HES IN SPACE U DICK SO THERES NO GRAVITY!!!!!!!!!!!

Hm.

Quite a sad story with very odd rhyming.

(@468255

The heat of going through the atmosphere would kill him, and melt the chocolate. Besides, there's gravity, so he would've died by the fall. Especially if he landed on something sharp. other than grass. But he would still die if he landed on grass.)

Great Drama

BW the rhyme scheme and Ave Maria at the end was intense lol
Great Job

great conflict

Nice original story, what a dilemma that character had! Sometimes it's hard to write conflict in a short story, but this was very clear. Liked how it was B&W, kept it dramatic.