definitely had potential
a couple improvements i would suggest:
improve audio, it was difficult to make out the words, which i feel are an important component of this flash
clean up some of the animation, some of the perspectives seemed a little sloppy. you might want to consider going back and cleaning it up a little bit or re drawing some of the scenes.
other than that, great song and some really good ideas. with some minor corrections this would definitely would be a 10/10 animation