blaaaaaaaaaablaaaaaaaaaablaaaaaaaaaa..........
pretty good action sequence but your story telling is totally boring...you need to make it more dynamic, snappy...
blaaaaaaaaaablaaaaaaaaaablaaaaaaaaaa..........
pretty good action sequence but your story telling is totally boring...you need to make it more dynamic, snappy...
i would actually watch this if it was on tv
really cool story, and its not something that doesnt seem realistic, it could happen if enough people really believed in something of that magnitude
Potential
Well to be honest at first I was really bored, really bored. the story developed well and it managed to keep my attention. I hope you plan to keep it up you have a lot of potential for a fairly good series.
hope to give you a 10 on your next installment,
~Raz~
WOW!!!
that was great!
interesting
i like it mainly for the story the animation could be better but its good enough i can tell you worked hard on this keep it up