Pretty good!
One thing that wonders me though which i know is irrelevant but...
Do you have some sort of problem saying your "S's. Sound a bit exaggerated :3
Reviews for "Solar City"
Change the Dialogue
If this is the only human civilization left, I think it would be too small for the government to deceive easily; why does the government bother claiming that drafted people "volunteered"? It seems more believable to me that they would get the notice and tell their families the truth; either that, or they go missing in the middle of their day. They're neither convicts nor ghetto residents: they all have unique clothes which aren't threadbare. I think it would be more realistic if they are drafted and know it. The regime is desperate enough, I think it could function that way.
The action is great. Because the animation is so short, there is infinite flexibility for the reason why those people are captive and why the hero is saving them. What was that, 25 seconds of dialogue? You could change that to anything.
I like your drawing and the music sets an excited mood. Your execution is solid, it's just the story that I feel needs work.
Lythero responds:
Very good point. I'll try and mix around with reasons of as to how/why people are getting kidnapped exactly.
RIBBONS OF DOOM
I think you need to make a seris of this...and without a lisp.
Lythero responds:
LOL, I HAS A LISP NOW?
I smell a sequel
Yeah length is my only issue with this flash, otherwise very good
looks like it will be good
yup, like everyone is saying, longer vids