no....
I couldn't even get into the first minute of it: Here's why.
1) It was just a bunch of random shit (see 2) squiggling and moving around the screen at incredibly fast rates.
2) The colour brown made it look like a bunch of shit was being splashed around everywhere.
If splashing pieces of shit around to get a picture of a room or a person or just a bunch of lines moving around is YOUR idea of art, then you need a reality check.
SO in order to attempt to help, I will offer what I can, the solutions are pretty simple:
1) DON'T USE BROWN WHEN DOING SOMETHING LIKE THIS, maybe green or black, or even blue... Let's go blue because it has a water effect and would make this much more pleasant to watch.
2) Stop with the squiggles. Allow something to be watchable, you can use the squiggles here and there in order to give an effect of something. Just don't throw it all over the screen saying it means something.
3) When I clicked this, I was thinking of a short involving a couple drunk guys walking/driving/what have you whilst drinking booze. Make the title relevant.
Hope this helps.