You hav Improved!
For people who gave a score of 5 or lower look at the latest episode the animations is way better!
Reviews for "Adrellia Village #1"
the gap is too wide between the play button and the bottom of the frame. Awesome though, 5 stars
Hmmm...
It's not reall entertaining, but there is effort put into this.
Art/Animation: 7/10
First, there's need to smoothen the objects (the humans). The movement, however, was good. It was basic art, so everything should be smooth. The mouth movement were not good, they should be at one place, and not moving around the face.
Music/Voice: 8/10
The voices were not really good. First is because you could basically hear the air hitting the mic. To prevent this, stand 1 meter away from the mic and speak loudly. The music was good, no denying that.
Plot: 8/10
It was plain boring, but since it's a series, it'll be a good beginner. However, it's recommended to put 1 and 2 in one flash (or three in one) since one chapter doesn't use that much space. Therefore it would be better for the viewer since he doesn't have to click through two/three submissions.
Overall, a 7/10, 3/5. Major improvement for the animation and mic needed to make the animation better.
It's hard to offer a lot of critisism on this, since the plot is part of a series.
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MistyE responds:
Thank you for your review!
So it begins
A little short, but nevertheless, an introduction to the Adrellia Village saga. Where did you come up with that name from?
So, we've been introduced a little to Drake and his own personality, though the other jokes in the piece do take away from that part of the plot a little too much, considering the amount of material that you have here. I'd have made it go a little further fir the first episode, reaching perhaps the castle, before calling it a day in this world.
Some of the jokes seem a little lazy, though quite funny. Jokes such as "and they fought, killing two hours of Drake's time" it was funny, but could have used some sort of battle music in the background and perhaps the sound of dogs fighting, perhaps with the occasional sound of swords clashing, for example.
It does show how far you've come in a relatively short space of time, with these episodes and the quality, compared between then and now. It shows a good learning curve and that you're willing to experiment, to learn new techniques.
Best of luck with that, now on to Episode 2!
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MistyE responds:
Adrellia Village came from an old story I wrote long ago about warriors and demons in medieval times. The name of the town, "Adrellia" isn't based on anything specific and "Adrellia Village" sounded like an appropriate title.
Interesting point. Episode 2 sees him in the castle. Thank you for your review!
Good to see the first one
Good to see the first episode of this series. I guess this will help me to understand the later episodes better.
It's also interesting to see the very first episode, because now it's easy to see how much you improved over the time. Graphcis wise and animation wise. The graphics are not bad in this episode, but they sure look a lot cleaner and more polished in newer episodes. Also, the animations are very rough here, another thing that gets better over the time.
I really liked Drakes facial expression when he walks. You should use that more often, it looks really funny. :)
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