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Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1"

very original

Another anime about his friends, in the world of zelda and final fantasy in the epic fight of a demon clan

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eh...I can see where Durox is coming from. my God. Poor art and poorer voices. Don't you have friends that can at least help instead of your pathetic voice overs.

It's utter crap.

Before I wrote this review, I checked if you had a website because the problems on the math test seemed to be at low grade level so, I checked if you made a website based on the series and you did, I checked the characters and they were 13 and I was disturbed when that kid grabbed his balls because that is child pornography which, you could be arrested for doing that. The voice acting is emotionless, the dialogue is horribly written, the detail is crap including on the characters (a 11 year old could do better), the formula is generic, plot isn't interesting, the characters are uninteresting also, and how do individuals here the outside perfectly from an indoor classroom? Thats lack of editing. The flash has just a bunch of sexual and broke-back (gay) jokes with swearing doesn't make the flash funny and will only appeal to a 10 year old. How can this be considered "original" also? Like I said, the formula is like a crappy generic high-school (even though their in middle-school) anime. Sir, you have killed my brain cells with so many errors in this episode. Try to do better.

Sigh

I don't know what this is trying to be. I kinda feel like your target audience is either 1. just your friends, or 2. people who are already pretty familiar with this series and the concept. I'm neither of these people so I just felt alienated, not understanding who any of these characters are (they really aren't distinguished well except for Rat seeing as he's the focus). Pretty much none of the jokes worked for me either; this whole cartoon seems like a way to publicise the injokes you have with your friends or something, and it doesn't work. In fact, a high school comedy setting where the author inserts himself into the cartoon with his friends just seems like the most unoriginal thing ever, man.

But it could've been saved if it had good character designs, drawings or animation. The only differences between the characters are their hair and clothes, they're otherwise all the exact same template. Size, head shape, facial features (especially since you've emitted most of them). I mean god damn, even the shots outside the school where you just copy and paste the same grey character walking past the scene 3 times. It's just lazy.

But the biggest problem throughout all of this was the sound design. The voices were all bad quality and quiet as hell, or would suddenly turn really loud. And it's pretty frustrating that I had to mute this computer to stop the music on the menu screen while I write this review. I guess that's not something I should mark you down for, but you should consider stuff like this in future.

The ending made me kinda almost smirk, I'll give you that. But you need to either make this a lot funnier or a lot better animated and drawn (preferably both, though).

Fucking Horrible

Is what I repeatedly said to myself watching this.

I can't find one good thing to say about this. I've seen "so bad it's funny" but this is my first experience seeing "so bad I might have leukemia" animation was bad, voice acting is barely understandable, and from what I've heard (because I didn't have the stomach to sit through it all) was it had pedophilia.

The story is cliched and extremely 80's - 90's high school themed (which has never been funny). and to fight conformity WITH conformity is down right retarded, if it's so irrelevant then why do all the main characters look exactly the same? Also lack of chins

Overall it's a fail coated crap-fest, how this got past judgment is beyond me. Stop drowning this already doomed site with shitacular weaboo flashes, and learn to be original