Not Bad.
Very brilliant for a first flash, just work on your script and raise the volume :)
Reviews for "Not a Mind Reader"
All you need is louder audio!
Ranked this an 8 on content, would and WILL rank 10 if audio level is increased! :)
I had trouble hearing it XD
try to up the volume on the audio,
other than that, not a bad start! Keep trying dude!
You have potential.
I see great potential in you young one. Work on your sync'ing and try writing out a script for the next one.