well
the story was good, but i don't get the point of the 'batman' voice. plus, it's way overdramticized, and you really abused that light reflection effect. keep trying
Reviews for "Meet Larry"
Good idea, but falls short
The concept is great and even some of the animation stands out above average. However, some scenes are sub-par and could use minor tweaking in order to improve a great deal (the opening office scene for instance - very rough and not very well drawn.)
The biggest flaw of this is the voice recording. For their purpose, they fit. However, because you recorded this on a dinky mic and did not edit it very well, it becomes very annoying hearing the white noise pop in and out whenever the vocals take place. Thankfully, not very many pops or peaking.
So, 6/10
Really Good
Agreed from below, touching. I think this is a really important lesson to learn, but people often waste their life away and only realize when it's too late to do anything about it. Thanks monk!
Touching.
And when I thought everything on here was just comedies.
hey hey kids
going places... just work on your art and animation. its not bad...