I am speechless
You Are Getting Somewhere it voice and writing is ok
A good effort
Your getting somewhere... just not very far. Your animation and art style was below average but your biggest problem is your writing. Talk about cliche hell and the ridiculous voice acting doesn't help either. I wish I could have taken it seriously but I couldn't. Nice try at least and I look forward to seeing what you'll do next.
just amazing, another proof
that its story what drives any