it felt SO CLOSE!
This flash would have been absolutely beautiful if it had backgrounds, but without them the flash doesn't have anything but trains moving in random directions. Nice music and animation, though.
Reviews for "Trains"
MorrowDays responds:
lol thanks for the addviicee
Weird
The whole flash seems so organic to me (stylistically). Kind of freaky looking. I would have loved to seen more detail in your backgrounds with that style in mind. It just seemed that much of the animation felt so empty.
Anyways just my thoughts.
MorrowDays responds:
yeah. :)
Cute
I liked it, but the animation was choppy in some places. Work at it a bit, and maybe you'll have something. Maybe a dialog, or something to make a bit of a plot. Good job, though.
Nice change of pace
I really like the calming pastel colors and the abstract style you animated this in. It's a little slow-paced, the music got monotonous toward the end, and I personally think the story is kind of lacking, but otherwise I really liked this one. Seeing the iconic pastel characters was like seeing a children's storybook come to life.
Great work!