A subtle thing that makes it clever?
I'm not catching on, i feel dissastisfied. Is it that he got on and off at the same place, just to enjoy the ride? It already seemed more like a rollercoaster to me. Seems a bit simple tough. The guys head looks like that of a spermatozoid and the tracks are kinda organic and tubular ... but thats just my messed up mind working right there ... i suspect.
On to the actual review then. I can appreciate this, but i had difficulty keeping focused towards the end and some scenes i was wondering whether or not i had already seen them. It just didnt pique my interest enough, but thats just me.
The song is well composed but maybe if it would build up to reach a climax towards the end it would be less boring. Considering it's made with garageband and a keyboard it's pretty impressive. I really like the art, the organic style and animation. (esp the bird).