Well.
Its a little better then that other flash. Better music for sure. Then as far as funny, I seen nothing amusing. Art, needs alot of work. And voices where all copied, as anyone can tell, and it really didn't need to be put there. I think you just need to spend atleast a week or two before you let out another. Unless you are aiming to have the most turds of the week. Then keep this work up.
Lack of effort killed it.
In my opinion, this flash was generally not humorous. If you worked on it more, maybe spent more effort on it and voice acted it, it could be a really decent flash. But it seems like you made this in about fifteen minutes.
Three stars for potential.
P.S. Work on your spelling. You will get less criticism as a result.
this site is for falsh not speling you faggot !!!!!!!!!!!1