Very well done.
Space Hulk meets Red Dwarf. I love the way that you've drawn this piece, as the characters look really nicely rounded and they have been animated brilliantly as well.
I was a little confused as to why the genestealers would be portrayed as green by the computer interface screen - usually the red dots would have been for enemies, with the green to signify the programmed "good guys" - if you're going for Red being Space Marines, surely the 'stealers could have been in purple.
I'd have made reference to the former incarnations of Space Marines being ultramarines, so therefore having different coloured uniforms now, with potentially the Blood Angels leaping forward to the fore.
I'd love to see some recurring characters in the next few missions that you might be doing. Perhaps the sergeant / captain style character that got burned coming back with soot marks all over his face and a bandage on a head wound of some sort, to go with his new mistrust of the chap with the flamer?
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