you guys...
Im givin a 7 only becuz my girl Brush has her hand in it....Bit of advice...don't post
works in progress...if its not done people will rate and comment as such.
Hope to see improvement !
Reviews for "shroogy the alien prequil"
lgnxhll responds:
thx this is a prequel
Shroogy
Not too bad, artwork was fine, although it was really short but it was good.
lgnxhll responds:
thanks episode 1 coming soon
for the people who sez i suck !
I drew the first scene and the second but lgnxhll turned mine TO A CRAP then i drew the part with the bird but he F*cked up my tween too ! AND the MUSIC uhh ! u said trust me THIS IS SHIT !
lgnxhll responds:
how did i make urs crap the alien looks fine and the tween was like that when you sent me the file.
and i did the second everything exept the bird pat but i did the gas part
by the way the first space scene was pretty good
OMG ... :(
SkilledBrush! What the hell have you done!! I like you! I read the script in the extras ... that was not a script! It sound like you only send them your idea ... Did they not even wait for the real script?? They dident even follow the draft ... You are amazing at writing scripts! I seen them! But I now they are sensitve! They have to come out perfetcly or they become like shit!! They made it shit!!
They dident let you write a actionscript (or wat its called) did they? Becuse I now you ... If you lead a project you would have forced this kids to do it better! I bet it would have been raw and funny! Becuse a hungry little alien sound fun, if you show him just right ... please tell me you are leading the next one ...
lgnxhll responds:
i am still submitting the next one and i think we fired icandraw so only me and skilled brush work on the next one while we get a new person for character design.
I promise the next one will be betterand im not the one who didnt get the real script pm icandraw
OH NOES
ANIMATION 1/10
The only "smooth" part were when it landed and when it ate that bird.
SOUND 2/10
Dodododododo *scratch scratch* I like that loop, its catchy.
ART 2/10
IcanDraw? more like ICANTDraw LOLOLO. But seriously make more elaborated characters or something.
STORY 0/10
BALLS? FARTS? BIRDS? Are you serious?
INTERACTIVITY 1/10
By interactivity I mean how buttons worked and that. One point for the extras. But the buttons didnt work correctly.
TOTAL SCORE 1.2
APROX SCORE 1
lgnxhll responds:
catchy loop by yours truly
sorry icandraw gave me a summary not the script.
He did character design not me.
i think we fired ICANDRAW from team schroogy meanwhile check out the schroogy comic on my art page.
The next one will be better .
this was a pilot for the series i animated the landing and most stuff after it