Eeh...
A few complaints; After you hit start, watching the pencil write out the title was very long and boring.
The animation was pretty choppy, progression was slow and relied heavily on text messages on the screen.
It's most redeeming quality is that you seemed to have replaced the sprite art with your own pencil copies which was a little nice.
I know the opening was slow, which I'm sure a lot of low votes come from that, seeing as I'm sure it could be voted on by the time the opening is done.. But like you said, I did most of the artwork all on my own. I did all the animation till it Mario RPG, thats when I tried to do it, but too hard to do it, thats when I found images for it and had to work for awhile on it. But anyways, thanks for the review =P
There's a little mistake...
Learn how to write! Or at least get someone who KNOWS english to do the script
I know how to write.. I know english.. its just I learned that way to write. Hence doing it as the goomba talking and baby talk. So its my interpritation of them talking. So long as you have the first and last letter where they are supposed to be, you can read it just fine
intro too long
not too bad but the intro was really too long and you should desactivated the play button
yeah I thought of doing that, seeing as I resubmitted this movie, but have to much junk going on around the house that I forgot to deactivate it, but thanks for noticing, lol
Eh...
It's ok but,well first the begging writing could have been sped up and maybe quicken the shroom thing. Other wise it was ok though.
I know the beginning was too slow, thats the main draw back thing, but the shroom, I don't see too much of a problem with that.. It made it past the voting, so fine by me, lol