okay
nice animation not so funny storyline
do it better next time
okay
nice animation not so funny storyline
do it better next time
Not Bad...
I really liked the animations and the story line, but the sound was not so great. The sound was so quiet that it was hard to hear. Maybe on you're next flash, you should make the sound a bit louder. Other than that, the flash was pretty funny.
Oh my nice
Very nice drawings and the scenario is quite ok. Sorry about the hater lickinghard, he must be a prawn... The only thing that your flash lacked was a better sense of rythm and better jokes. Other than that, it was quite good really!
Hahah
At first I opened this flash in a new tab. When I heard the plucky daisy music, I was wondering when did I on my flash (The one I posted on Newgrounds)? Hahah.
This flash was pretty good. Just that some characters lack expression. Keep up the great work.
This could have been better
The voice acting was so bad. It would actually be better if you did this with better voice actors instead of high pitched children voices. Maybe have an adult do the voices while you work on the animation and material. The movie could have been better if there was more music and a variation in voices. The material was okay, but the bad voices ruined the effect.