WELL DONE!
This, is one of your best Akradon! Eh? You probably don't remember me, i have been goe for some time. I used to talk to ya all the time! When ya think the next is coming out? (Most likely the near end of the year or fall). Also, what happened to this one that made you mad? One more thing, whats the name of the Menu's theme?
made me mad? what you mean lol. The menus theme is by Nightwish - 7 days to the Wolves.
Don't know when the next one is out yet, still waiting for the script off Karlos.
pretty cool
I like very much this episode. I wait in the next one.
pretty gud
it took a while but it waz pretty gud
all of sonics freinds r pretty much dead now lol
mecha sonic and emerl didnt expect to c them
the only part tht ws bad was the fire gun was slow but other than tht it was all gud
keep up dha gud work cant wait tell eps 4.
Nice going
i liked it the story telling is good kept me interested the fights are better but the part with the fire gun was kinda slow but if a bit smoother it will be perfect!
Good Job bro!
Better.
The story is moving along smoothly. The fight scene was an improvement over the last and I like the little touches you added. The soundtrack felt natural and blended in with the scene, I really like it. Some of the problems I have though is you seem to be following the basic cliches in a lot of stories that are similar to this. I felt you could have revealed the identity of the main guy a little better instead of just anouncing who he is, also gave him a different name, but this is just a personal taste. Really check your spelling and grammar since I saw too many mistakes in the dialouge and punctuation. The fighting still needs some more improvement, mostly in making it flow better but you are going in the right direction. Just make sure you don't give too much power to any one of the people involved in the story, otherwise, it wouldn't make sense the villans downfall with so much power, or the gain of the hero's power. Overall though, it's really well made.
Cheers dude, but one question...wrong name for Shuma? Whats his right name then?