Not bad for a first.
Your animation is great. 9/10
You need a start button. -1
There is a loop at the end. Instead, add a replay button. -1
It's short but it's your fist so that is ok. +0
The movements of link are great +1
The art is okay but could use improvement +0
You have sound effects and music +1
Background animation could be better. -1
You need a preloader -1
Comedy/cuteness +1 (Although it varies)
Other wise okay job.
Thanks for you input from a bout a year ago come check Link's explosive discovery where all of these have been improved I think.
lol just for the lolz
10/10 5/5
Finally
I finally saw another FIRST SUBMISSION animation with quality. I guessed that the last time was really last, but I was wrong.
for your first flash it was really good
It was funny and it was good made but you need to better some drawing and try to make a bit more longer videos.